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  1. Shaun Mason

    Shaun Mason Somebody you used to know.

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  2. Bondzai

    Bondzai Your Mom's Best Friend

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    It's a little hard to read unless you already know it says TMFL. That being said, I'm pretty sure everyone on the site knows what TMFL is and would probably recognize it.
     
  3. Shaun Mason

    Shaun Mason Somebody you used to know.

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    Just playing around tonight.
     
  4. Shaun Mason

    Shaun Mason Somebody you used to know.

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    What do you think Keller?
     
  5. Keller

    Keller The enemy of my enemy is my friend.

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    Has some decent text effects but I dont care much for the font.
     
  6. Shaun Mason

    Shaun Mason Somebody you used to know.

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    I just like the way it flows into one block.
     
  7. Keller

    Keller The enemy of my enemy is my friend.

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    There are a lot of fonts like that - fonts are tricky though - one someone likes another person will find too cliche.
     
  8. Hova

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    dreadful
     
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  9. MoonBBad

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    I don't like it either.
     
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  10. CHUNKNESS

    CHUNKNESS Commissioner Quality Simulation Football

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    If you're going to use the shadow effect, you may want to use a color that contrasts more than the black. I wouldn't recommend using the orange either, though, because bright colors like orange and red have a tendency to bleed unless they are muted or outlined. Perhaps choose more of a weighted outline. I would also recommend a font that is less ornate; easier to read. Good luck!
     
  11. Shaun Mason

    Shaun Mason Somebody you used to know.

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    Appreciate the feedback.
     
  12. sawemoff

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    I agree. The font isnt the best and the orange color seems out of place. How about we go with Maroon and White. :) I know Jmustang1968 wouldn't mind!
     
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  13. fuzzyl0gic

    fuzzyl0gic No new friends

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    Looks classy, I like it.
     
  14. Masler

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    Little hard on the eyes.
     
  15. Dru50

    Dru50 Still Chicago's #1 son

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    I couldn't put something like that together, so I'll give you kudos there Shaun....but I think it's a little off. The font could be good but I think the color scheme makes it hard to look at...especially on a black background.
     
  16. Shaun Mason

    Shaun Mason Somebody you used to know.

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    How about this one?

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  17. Keller

    Keller The enemy of my enemy is my friend.

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    I'm a fan of the shield but it seems too triangular maybe. I like the text effects as well. I don't care for the blackout football player, the helmet seems like its in a darker black so it seems disjointed. Additionally I would prefer something cleaner as the backdrop. I want to see the text really pop.
     
  18. Shaun Mason

    Shaun Mason Somebody you used to know.

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    I didn't make this one. I personally like it.
     
  19. Keller

    Keller The enemy of my enemy is my friend.

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    Well whoever made it, thats my feedback.
     
  20. TEClemson53

    TEClemson53 Walk On

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  21. PIG BOMB

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    A while back we were tossing around ideas and Keller commented on a submission that you guys wanted something professional looking - this shield one looks like clip art and about as far from professional as you can get IMO
     
  22. Shaun Mason

    Shaun Mason Somebody you used to know.

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    Ouch
     
  23. Keller

    Keller The enemy of my enemy is my friend.

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    Dear Trey,

    If you quit this league I will kill you.

    Love,
    Keller
     
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  24. TEClemson53

    TEClemson53 Walk On

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    1. I'm not
    2. Fitzgerald for Spiller will solidify my spot for life
     
  25. Keller

    Keller The enemy of my enemy is my friend.

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    That trade would never be approved.
     

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